South of Broad by Pat Conroy
Doubleday / Random House ISBN 978-0-385-41305-3
pg 149
"Leo found my sister and I handcuffed to chairs..."
my sister and me
pg 206
...as Murray helps us get our luggage inside the ornate entryway.
nitpicking, but "inside" seems the wrong word for the situation. Like the luggage is going into the walls, or something.
14 April 2010
Homer's Odyssey, by Gwen Cooper
Homer's Odyssey by Gwen Cooper
Delacorte Press ISBN 978-1-61664-199-3
I found no mistakes in this book
I'm not here to critique, just to edit, but I have to say, this one will haunt me like Black Beauty has, for the rest of my life, I'm sure.
Delacorte Press ISBN 978-1-61664-199-3
I found no mistakes in this book
I'm not here to critique, just to edit, but I have to say, this one will haunt me like Black Beauty has, for the rest of my life, I'm sure.
Rough Country, by John Sandford
Rough Country by John Sandford
G. P. Putnam's Sons / Penguin Group ISBN 978-0-399-15598-7
I found no mistakes in this book
G. P. Putnam's Sons / Penguin Group ISBN 978-0-399-15598-7
I found no mistakes in this book
Scavenger, by David Morrell
Scavenger by David Morrell
Vanguard Press ISBN 978-1-59315-441-7
pg 144
"It's what caught my intention..."
attention
pg 204
Costs extra You do it through your home computer...
missing punctuation
Vanguard Press ISBN 978-1-59315-441-7
pg 144
"It's what caught my intention..."
attention
pg 204
Costs extra You do it through your home computer...
missing punctuation
So Brave, Young, and Handsome, by Leif Enger
So Brave, Young, and Handsome by Leif Enger
Atlantic Monthly Press / Grove/Atlantic ISBN 978-1-60751-199-1
pg 139
Perhaps there was still time to keep my own hazy outline from becoming permanent.
I think he means impermanent, permanently hazy, something else than how it reads
pg 192
Siringo didn't answer but less than an hour he reined up
in less than an hour; less than an hour later, etc
Atlantic Monthly Press / Grove/Atlantic ISBN 978-1-60751-199-1
pg 139
Perhaps there was still time to keep my own hazy outline from becoming permanent.
I think he means impermanent, permanently hazy, something else than how it reads
pg 192
Siringo didn't answer but less than an hour he reined up
in less than an hour; less than an hour later, etc
Labels:
atlantic monthly press,
grove/atlantic,
leif enger
Mother Road, by Dorothy Garlock
Mother Road by Dorothy Garlock
Doubleday / Warner Books ISBN 0-7394-3547-7
I found no mistakes in this book
Doubleday / Warner Books ISBN 0-7394-3547-7
I found no mistakes in this book
Bagombo Snuff Box, by Kurt Vonnegut
Bagombo Snuff Box by Kurt Vonnegut
Berkley Books ISBN 0-425-17446-8
I found no mistakes in this book
Berkley Books ISBN 0-425-17446-8
I found no mistakes in this book
Sisters of the Raven, by Barbara Hambly
Sisters of the Raven by Barbara Hambly
Aspect / Warner Books ISBN 0-446-61536-6
I found no mistakes in this book
Aspect / Warner Books ISBN 0-446-61536-6
I found no mistakes in this book
Homeland, by R. A. Salvatore
Homeland R. A. Salvatore
Wizards of the Coast ISBN 978-0-7869-3953-4
pg 26
Every now and came a killing flash
now and then?
pg 121
"Just what the first house needs more clerics!"
needs a comma
Wizards of the Coast ISBN 978-0-7869-3953-4
pg 26
Every now and came a killing flash
now and then?
pg 121
"Just what the first house needs more clerics!"
needs a comma
An Innocent Client, by Scott Pratt
An Innocent Client Scott Pratt
Onyx / Penguin Group ISBN 978-0-451-41265-2
pg 232
floosies
floozies
Onyx / Penguin Group ISBN 978-0-451-41265-2
pg 232
floosies
floozies
A Stained White Radiance, by James Lee Burke
A Stained White Radiance James Lee Burke
Harper Collins ISBN 978-0-380-72047-7
pg 10
neutrias
nutria is the singular and plural (no 'e', no 's')
pg 31
Tripod zigzagged back and forth on his chin
chain
pg 124
"It's really good." It was, too. Ham and onion and horseradish, one of my favorites."
there's either one too many or one too few quotation marks in the line
pg 181
neutria
nutria
pg 282
Gerardo Rivera
Geraldo
Harper Collins ISBN 978-0-380-72047-7
pg 10
neutrias
nutria is the singular and plural (no 'e', no 's')
pg 31
Tripod zigzagged back and forth on his chin
chain
pg 124
"It's really good." It was, too. Ham and onion and horseradish, one of my favorites."
there's either one too many or one too few quotation marks in the line
pg 181
neutria
nutria
pg 282
Gerardo Rivera
Geraldo
2009 Best American Short Stories, edited by Alice Sebold
The Best American Short Stories 2009 Alice Sebold, ed.; Heidi Pitlor, series ed.
Houghton Mifflin Harcourt ISBN 978-0-618-79225-2
pg 28
the plastic in box
inbox, or in-box
pg 133
"...but maybe he's thinking, Thanks for the hand but he's on top of it."
need some more quotation marks in there
Houghton Mifflin Harcourt ISBN 978-0-618-79225-2
pg 28
the plastic in box
inbox, or in-box
pg 133
"...but maybe he's thinking, Thanks for the hand but he's on top of it."
need some more quotation marks in there
Elsewhere, by William Peter Blatty
Elsewhere by William Peter Blatty
Cemetery Dance Publications ISBN 978-1-61523-582-7
pg 25
about a tenth of mile
left out another 'a'
Cemetery Dance Publications ISBN 978-1-61523-582-7
pg 25
about a tenth of mile
left out another 'a'
The Broker, by John Grisham
The Broker by John Grisham
Doubleday / Random House ISBN 0-385-51045-4
I found no mistakes in this book
Doubleday / Random House ISBN 0-385-51045-4
I found no mistakes in this book
Road Dogs, by Elmore Leonard
Road Dogs by Elmore Leonard
William Morrow / Harper Collins ISBN 978-1-61523-826-2
pg 52
"There rich people and not rich people..."
They're, or there're, or they are or there are
pg 72
pg 79
that's what I get for waiting so long before entering these... now I can't find what I thought was wrong on these pages.
pg 129
should have quotation marks around the sentence at the bottom of the page --where he's thinking to himself-- to set it off from what he's not thinking.
"No, you don't go back, you go straight ahead."
pg 130
?
pg 185
making a Uey
not sure, but shouldn't that be U-ey?
pg 217
Actually it's been, four.
pause for effect? Comma doesn't belong.
William Morrow / Harper Collins ISBN 978-1-61523-826-2
pg 52
"There rich people and not rich people..."
They're, or there're, or they are or there are
pg 72
pg 79
that's what I get for waiting so long before entering these... now I can't find what I thought was wrong on these pages.
pg 129
should have quotation marks around the sentence at the bottom of the page --where he's thinking to himself-- to set it off from what he's not thinking.
"No, you don't go back, you go straight ahead."
pg 130
?
pg 185
making a Uey
not sure, but shouldn't that be U-ey?
pg 217
Actually it's been, four.
pause for effect? Comma doesn't belong.
10 January 2010
now reading...
Road Dogs, by Elmore Leonard (several mistakes)
The Farmer's Daughter, by Jim Harrison (no mistakes)
The Brief Wondrous Life of Oscar Wao, by Junot Díaz (no mistakes)
A Stained White Radiance, by James Lee Burke (several mistakes)
The Farmer's Daughter, by Jim Harrison (no mistakes)
The Brief Wondrous Life of Oscar Wao, by Junot Díaz (no mistakes)
A Stained White Radiance, by James Lee Burke (several mistakes)
Crusader's Cross, by James Lee Burke
Crusader's Cross by James Lee Burke
Simon and Schuster ISBN 978-0-7432-7720-4
pg 102 and throughout
"The Chalonses..."
although when speaking of Valentine Chalons and his family you'd pronounce it "Chalonses," you'd spell it Chalons'.
pg 137
He was sitting at a metal desk, in the middle of large room...
in the middle of "a" large room
pg 140
The rumors that he did business with the Giacanos were I'm sure true.
need some punctuation around "I'm sure"
pg 198
Her eyes lighted on the packages in the bed of my pickup
since she's sitting in a subcompact and "stopped abreast of me," it's unlikely she could see into the bed of the pickup.
pg 427
The guy was in his car at the Fair Grounds,
unnecessary capitalization
Simon and Schuster ISBN 978-0-7432-7720-4
pg 102 and throughout
"The Chalonses..."
although when speaking of Valentine Chalons and his family you'd pronounce it "Chalonses," you'd spell it Chalons'.
pg 137
He was sitting at a metal desk, in the middle of large room...
in the middle of "a" large room
pg 140
The rumors that he did business with the Giacanos were I'm sure true.
need some punctuation around "I'm sure"
pg 198
Her eyes lighted on the packages in the bed of my pickup
since she's sitting in a subcompact and "stopped abreast of me," it's unlikely she could see into the bed of the pickup.
pg 427
The guy was in his car at the Fair Grounds,
unnecessary capitalization
Zen and the Art of Knitting, by Bernadette Murphy
Zen and the Art of Knitting by Bernadette Murphy
Adams Media Corporation ISBN 1-58062-654-8
pg 118
A t-bone sits on a yarn, constructed plate
no comma after yarn; actually "yarn-constructed" would look better hyphenated.
pg 120
She was in bed recovering from wisdom teeth surgery
that would be wisdom tooth surgery, even when referring to more than one tooth.
pg 206
If you've never done it before, buy a pair of needles and experiment.
She's talking about knitting in the round, which is done on circular needles, which are referred to as "a needle," not "a pair of needles."
Adams Media Corporation ISBN 1-58062-654-8
pg 118
A t-bone sits on a yarn, constructed plate
no comma after yarn; actually "yarn-constructed" would look better hyphenated.
pg 120
She was in bed recovering from wisdom teeth surgery
that would be wisdom tooth surgery, even when referring to more than one tooth.
pg 206
If you've never done it before, buy a pair of needles and experiment.
She's talking about knitting in the round, which is done on circular needles, which are referred to as "a needle," not "a pair of needles."
04 January 2010
Paper Doll, by Robert B. Parker
Paper Doll by Robert B. Parker
G. P. Putnam's Sons ISBN 0-425-14155-1
pg 7
framing hammer... the kind with a long wooden handle
Framing hammers generally have a steel or fiberglass handle. Ball-peen hammers and mauls have wooden handles.
pg 77
He had on engineer's boots
they are called engineer boots. No possessive.
pg 159
"He at home?"
Farrell shook his head.
"Hospice," he said.
I assume Farrel shook his head no, but hospice is generally at home.
pg 189
...its wake a glassy furrow in the surface.
on the surface
..the trees, half unleaved, made spectral...
unleafed
pg 249
dog...jumped up on the couch... lay down between us.
Only Spenser is seated on the couch. Jefferson remained standing (see page 248).
G. P. Putnam's Sons ISBN 0-425-14155-1
pg 7
framing hammer... the kind with a long wooden handle
Framing hammers generally have a steel or fiberglass handle. Ball-peen hammers and mauls have wooden handles.
pg 77
He had on engineer's boots
they are called engineer boots. No possessive.
pg 159
"He at home?"
Farrell shook his head.
"Hospice," he said.
I assume Farrel shook his head no, but hospice is generally at home.
pg 189
...its wake a glassy furrow in the surface.
on the surface
..the trees, half unleaved, made spectral...
unleafed
pg 249
dog...jumped up on the couch... lay down between us.
Only Spenser is seated on the couch. Jefferson remained standing (see page 248).
02 January 2010
This Perfect Day, by Ira Levin
This Perfect Day by Ira Levin
Hard-cover edition, published in 1970 by Random House.
Old enough edition there is no ISBN.
I found no mistakes in this book.
Hard-cover edition, published in 1970 by Random House.
Old enough edition there is no ISBN.
I found no mistakes in this book.
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