Knit the Season by Kate Jacobs
G.P. Putnam's Sons ISBN 978-0-399-15638-0
pg 89
First sentence on the page is a fragment. Should be more like, "...she hesitated, freshly aware..."
pg 134
last paragraph on the page does not have a transition from her being in the front room with them, to "flopped down on her bed." It's as if her bed is in the living room.
pg 197
marked the page that there was a mistake, but can't find it now.
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