Perfect Circle, by Sean Stewart

Perfect Circle by Sean Stewart
Small Beer Press ISBN 1-931520-11-9

pg 9
...turned out to be a homicidal maniac just bust out from a Louisiana prison

busted, or is "bust" as past tense acceptable as dialect?

pg 24
and sifted over one lane, letting traffic drift into place around us.

shifted? drifted?

pg 35
"You've got to do for me, Will."

got to do it, got to do this?

pg 89
The Lady and the Tramp

there is no leading "the" in that title

pg 225
...and arrived at the medical office where she worked just before noon

better wording could make it sound like she works there all day, not only "just before noon."