30 November 2009

Skin Tight, by Carl Hiaasen

Skin Tight by Carl Hiaasen
Warner Books ISBN 0-446-69569-6

pg 4
houses...known as Stiltsville...and their kids got drunk on them in the summer.

I understand the houses are on stilts, therefore one is "on" the house rather than
"in" it, but this phrasing throughout the book is distracting.

pg 195
She rolled ever

rolled "over"

pg 270
He kissed her again. This was a good one.

a good kiss, or is he thinking she is a good one? "He kissed her again, making it a good one" or "He kissed her again, thinking, 'this is a good woman'?"

pg 415
and casted a bait over the side

cast

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