Bad Business, by Robert B. Parker

Bad Business, by Robert B. Parker
G. P. Putnam's Sons - Penguin Group ISBN 0-399-15145-1

pg 27
"But its important that they don't coincide."

"its" is a contraction of "it is" and needs an apostrophe.

pg 50
"On the other hand," I said "people don't report gunfire anyway."

should be a comma after "said."